critic

I love my holden style short. I think that is the best I've ever written in a long time, and I am proud of myslf. I know that the one thing that got me motivated to write it was all thos goddamns and crappy. That might be a little wierd but it's true, and it's type funny. I love how holden writes it's very interesting. Another reason I think I like it so much is because, it's a lot of rambling about nothing. Well it ultimately lead's to something but it seem as if it doesn't make sense, and I like that.